Ashes!
By the misty pane, over the candle flick,
The moon, shy, glides into the clouds thick,
Red eyes bore down on the parchment wet,
Dried and cringed from tears and sweat.
Toppled, the pot of ink on the table lay
Have had silently bowed to the winds’ say,
The quilt scribbling away words unspoken
Wishing to mend the strings broken.
Pages after pages the quilt bleeds,
As unto sweet longings it recedes
Carving delicate reminiscence faint
Of chained reveries, a tad restraint.
The wobbling flame, signals the end
But, more! More has to be penned.
Signed reluctantly, sealed with a kiss
With the pledge of a tomorrow, bliss!
And like epistles written every night,
Held tonight’s too to the flare bright
Crumbling, vanished into the smoke, lorn,
Dreams wrecked like a baby stillborn.
To collect, unto the urn, ashes, dry,
Bottling nights and memories wry
For one day, will set the urn free
On its way to you, across the sea.
Have you ever had lots to tell,
Writhing to break loose the spell?
Have you kept the nights awake,
Of hearts, desire and longings ache?




I’m not as mature as to be a critic of a poem. But I feel very nice while reading.
Thanks.
Shukoor
August 19, 2011 at 5:10 AM
Hey, welcome to my blog.
Glad you liked it. I, though, still am ameteur at poetry.
Abhishek
August 19, 2011 at 11:17 PM
The verse brought images of an earlier time before emails and ipads…when words graced the pages of scented paper…lovely poem.
slpmartin
August 19, 2011 at 8:30 PM
Thanks for the kind words.
Abhishek
August 19, 2011 at 11:15 PM
This is brilliant…love the title of the blog…:)
Saru Singhal
August 21, 2011 at 8:04 PM