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The Angel Song

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The Angel Song

I met a lost angel this night,
In the lonely woods, in plight.
Mending  her  broken  wings,
With  rugged  magic  strings.

“Can  you  help  me  out?” –
Her moist eyes in doubt,
-“will  grant  you  a  wish.”
Hands trembling in anguish.

“There,  they all  wait  for  me,
Bleeding  Souls in  teary  sea.
Those wounded soldiers there
With  nothing but  faith bare.”

How could I refuse!
An  angel  in  blues.
But I know not how,
How to fulfil this vow!

With a soft look into my eyes,
She read through the naked disguise
And  said “All I need  is a  drop  of  tear
To drag me out of this gnawing despair.”

Little  startling,  little  high
A little request I can’t deny.
So I squeezed out a bitter drop
A sacrifice for the little Aesop.

Happy again, she vanished in starry glow,
Rousing  up the fallen leaves with a  blow.
The wish, still, I have not put to use,
But  those  tears I started  still  ooze.

Written by Abhishek

August 12, 2010 at 6:40 PM

6 Responses

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  1. Your poetry has a very old world feel about it 🙂


    August 13, 2010 at 8:21 AM

  2. beautiful!


    August 13, 2010 at 9:15 AM

  3. Beautiful and very heartfelt. Especially loved the last two lines, very powerful.


    August 14, 2010 at 11:50 PM

  4. Such a beautiful poem…and what shall you wish for when the time comes? 😉


    August 15, 2010 at 3:14 AM

  5. beautiful.
    ‘bleeding souls in teary sea’
    ‘naked disguise’
    lovely flow in the whole poem.


    August 18, 2010 at 4:19 AM

  6. There is magic woven into your words, and it moves me.
    “There, they all wait for me,
    Bleeding Souls in teary sea.
    Those wounded soldiers there
    With nothing but faith bare.”
    — This is sublime 🙂


    September 18, 2010 at 11:15 AM

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