Creative Nuisance

Musings From My Soul

Quixotic

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As I stood looking out into the stretch,
Beauty  picturesque – a perfect  sketch,
Warm winds brushing against my cheek,
Calmness and charm for themselves speak.

Peace spread over as far as my eyes can see
And  the  winds  playful  on  a  flirting  spree,
The morning sun  riding  on the rising beam,
Seamlessly laid out on the soothing theme.

But, I tried  decoding  that mystic theme,
– The thumping sun and the fiery beam –
Chasing dreams, like bees on spree,
Behind veiled doors, none can see.

Oh! I sense tones hushed as these elements speak,
The rawness  and  ridicule  evident  on my cheek,
For it’s my mind fabricating the quixotic sketch,
It’s just the barren  desert  rearing in the stretch.



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Written by Abhishek

August 22, 2010 at 11:58 AM

12 Responses

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  1. Abhishek, great poetry compositions mate! This is my first time here… will be frequent for more doses of creative nuisance for sure.

    Mohan

    August 22, 2010 at 12:42 PM

  2. wonderful imagery!

    magiceye

    August 22, 2010 at 2:58 PM

  3. The sketch is yours?

    Purba

    August 23, 2010 at 9:03 AM

  4. Wonderful poetry, mate. Loved the abstractness in the imagery.

    D2

    August 23, 2010 at 9:30 AM

  5. Very vivid imagery in the poem…loved how you ended the poem…at bit of a surprise.

    slpmartin

    August 23, 2010 at 9:56 AM

  6. Amazing, love your choice of words, and the little game you played with our minds.

    The end was very unexpected, but was a perfect one. Great work! And lovely picture.

    deadpoet88

    August 23, 2010 at 3:30 PM

  7. Oh my!!! How the mind’s eye can transform even a barren desert into a beautiful landscape…
    Well expressed here, Abhishek… Awesome!
    The visual that you’ve created with the poem me think of a cup of coffee/tea someone’s sitting with, imagining into the horizon… 🙂
    It was just fabulous!!!

    Kavita

    August 24, 2010 at 2:31 AM

  8. creative with wit and cool…

    Jingle

    August 25, 2010 at 6:28 AM

  9. Hi! my first time here abhishek! u write so good poetry! thought provoking.

    RESTLESS

    restless

    August 25, 2010 at 5:49 PM

  10. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/26/happy-birthday-2-lisa-plus-happy-belated/

    help giving happy belated birthday wishes to 5 to 10 poets,
    take the butterfly award,
    enjoy!

    Jingle

    August 27, 2010 at 7:28 PM

  11. Hello, How are you?
    You are invited to attend Thursday Poets Rally week 27;
    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/25/thursday-poets-rally-week-27-august-26-sept-1-2010/

    Thanks for the attention!
    Happy Thursday!
    😉

    Jingle

    August 27, 2010 at 7:28 PM

  12. Sometimes, after spending hours searching for a true poetry site, my quest is rewarded with something like Creative Nuisance and Quixotic. Strong stuff. Now I have another bookmark with which to contend.
    Mike Patrick
    http://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/

    Mike Patrick

    January 28, 2011 at 2:43 AM


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