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Devil’s Casino

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Devil's Casino

Remember the wish in The Angel Song
The gifted wish I haven’t used all along,
Shielded from the tempestuous calm,
For wounds aching, as magic balm.

But, words fly quick and high,
Reached  the  Satan  in  a  sly,
He came down heavy on my door,
To snatch away the wish I bore.

Cornering me in my room alone,
He thundered for the wish I own.
Felt weak, but won’t bend my knees,
I, on empty roars such as these.

Meekness evident in His deadly vice,
He challenged me to a game of dice.
The aces, deuces and cinques clashed,
Blood and pride waiting to be smashed.

As the gruelling  feud  raged on forth,
I, tired, bloodied; but all that’s worth!
It’s  pride in my wish –  that’s to  prove
I knocked Him down in the final move.

Drained, void, slumped on the floor thud,
I, passed out soaked in sweat and blood,
-But I won! Oh! Of that I am sure-
as I embraced the wish pure.

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Written by Abhishek

August 26, 2010 at 7:03 PM

10 Responses

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  1. Brave savior!
    I’m glad you won, but most of all I’m ecstatic that you have such a wish in the first place.
    🙂

    zave

    August 26, 2010 at 8:32 PM

  2. Such an amazing sequel to the last poem…’wonderful’ is the word that comes to mind.

    slpmartin

    August 26, 2010 at 9:51 PM

  3. Wow, Abhishek!!! That was some fantastic imagery!! Very inspiring!!
    Glad you won your wish back!!
    — To Satan, “IN YOUR FACE, MAN!!!” 🙂

    Abhishek, YOU ROCK!!!

    Kavita

    August 27, 2010 at 1:51 PM

  4. awesome post.. 🙂

    Sayandeep Kundu

    August 29, 2010 at 10:21 PM

  5. Brilliant! Absolutely loved this! You’ve really outdone yourself on this one. Evil never triumphs.

    deadpoet88

    August 30, 2010 at 6:52 PM

  6. a suiting reply to the enemy of each one of us…keep striking back with all your might!!!!! I am with you.

    wanderer

    August 31, 2010 at 10:29 PM

  7. What a brilliant image. Marvelous!

    Arjit Srivastava

    September 12, 2010 at 4:00 PM

  8. Fantastic poem, amazing picture! LUVS IT!

    Mitchell

    September 23, 2010 at 5:37 AM

  9. Wonderful post.. Keep up the good work.

    Desiree

    September 30, 2010 at 3:14 PM

  10. Wow, angels must be pleased. You used the wish, rightly in time.

    ALIVE aLwaYs

    May 30, 2011 at 3:33 PM


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